Friday, 15 April 2011

Final Evaluation

The brief we were given was called our foundation portfolio it asked us to create an original music magazine, we had to include a front cover, a contents page and a double page spread, within these products we must have had at least four original images. The products we were to produce all had to follow a particular genre of our choice. In the end I choose my magazine to be Indie/Alternative. When I found out the brief I believe the best way to produce a professional magazine is by doing in depth research. I chose three different magazines that were similar to what I wanted my magazine to look like I used the L.I.I.A.R analysis which helps me analyse the language, ideology, institutions, audience and representation of magazine features and then I analysed the front cover, contents page and double page spread all individually. I analysed them on characteristics such as photography placement of text, mast head and puffs, the conventions used in magazines of that genre. This is shown in posts (my L.I.I.A.R analysis of three magazines, 23rd November 2010 http://kyraarthur.blogspot.com/2010/11/my-liiar-analysis-of-three-media.html
 ) When I discovered the band I was going to feature throughout my practical products, I conducted research on how smaller bands that contain two – three members are photographed and represented as show in post (Photographic Research, 15th December 2010, 11.01 http://kyraarthur.blogspot.com/2010/12/photographic-research.html) The conventions of this genre are vintage clothing, piercings and tattoo’s more conventions are explained in one of my previous posts (music genre on 23rd November, 2010 at 9:02) There is also conventions such as Not afraid to be Scruffy, Mainly male bands, Bracelets,  Unusual album artwork and Deep, meaningful lyrics. I believe my magazine is very conventional as my masthead is placed in the top right hand side it is a bold colour with a contrasting colour outline, This is a convention because when the magazines are stacked and racked in the shops you can usually only see the top right hand corner and they have to stand out to all the other magazines. The headline is placed in the centre and is the same colour as the masthead, you can also find strap lines which you find on a real magazine cover. Also there is a barcode and issue date, price and issue number in the lower right hand corner. My contents page also follows conventions by having a large title at the top of the page in the centre, having lots of headlines with the features underneath they all have page numbers which is seen on professional magazine contents page. My double page spread follows conventions by having a large picture of the main artists and having a large centred headline, the text of the article is also sorted into columns which is seen in all magazine articles. Also I have used drop caps for the start of the articles intro and main body. Then to attract my audience to read my article I have used up out quotes, which is seen in many magazines so it makes the reader want to read on and finish the article.  

My magazine represents my targeted social group (young adults – 16-25) by on the front cover offering the reader to ‘win free gig tickets for a whole year’, and also ‘the top 10 must have gifts’. The genre Indie/Alternative has a mainly male audience such as magazines like NME who have a 73%/27% male/female ratio (http://www.nme.com/mediapack/pdf/nme_media_information_full.pdf). However my front cover features a female band, This may attract females as the girls want to be like the band, or this may make males want to buy my magazine as they may be attracted to the band. My contents page features artists who that age range are interested in such as ‘Vampire Weekend’ and also ‘Tinie Tempah’. On my double page spread ‘the only exceptions’ are around my target age range and also are interested in the same things my audience are interested in such as hobbies and past times technology and festivals. The interview that is featured on my double page spread asks questions that I’m sure my audience would ask and want to find out, making them want to read all of the article.

I believe an institution such as Bauer Media as rival magazines such as NME are published by IPC media. I believe my magazine is very similar to NME apart from NME promotes new music I want my magazine to be produced in a similar way and follow a similar format. However I want my magazine to feature a few more mainstream artists. I think also my magazine and NME have the same target age range and the same readership profiles for example I believe my audience would see music as a main part of their live and I also expect the audience for NME and my magazine AMP to have same interests and hobbies such as playing sport going to the cinema and socializing with friends. They also have the same price range as NME and are published at the same intervals e.g. Monthly. Also at this moment in time Bauer Media doesn’t not publish any magazine like mine or a magazine that in anyway could rival NME. This is why I believe that Bauer Media should distribute my magazine.

I believe that the target audience for my magazine is the age range of about 16 – 25 as the genre of the music in my magazine has had a greater effect on this generation than any other however the fact that chart music sometimes features in my magazine this may target a younger audience however they will not be able to attend festivals so my magazines strap lines still target an older audience. The fact that the artists are within this age range and also the fact that on my double page spread the artists say that they would like to offer a student discount this directly relates to my audience and helps them identify with the artists. Also on my contents page it has features such as ‘this months top 10 albums’ and ‘your letters’  these features are what my target age range most enjoy reading these things. Also on my contents page it says about ‘in the spotlight’ a feature that introduces the readers to new and upcoming bands I feel that this is relevant to my target audience as people of that age are all about finding new music and talents and as technology has advanced things such as YouTube has made the generation able to access these artists and this has helped encourage their find for new music. So I believe this was a relevant thing to add to my magazine and helps attract the audience. This is another reason why on my contents page I have featured a website for my magazine as my target generation are driven by the internet and technology.

My magazine attracts it’s audience in many different ways. The first is by the style of the masthead, the font is very distinctive and not conventional and helps me connote the alternative genre. The way the artists are photographed make them look like they are having fun, full of live and that they are crazy, This is similar to how I expect my readers to act and behave. It helps the audience to relate to the artists. Just like on my double page spread I made the artists appear as normal and down to earth as possible, so the audience can relate to them and maybe hope that they will be in their position one day. The clothes that the artists are wearing are normal clothes found in high street shops they also match the genre of my magazine as the artist are wearing checked shirts and skinny jeans ‘music genre on 23rd November, 2010 at 9:02’ and the clothes of the artists may be similar to the audiences clothes nothing designer or out of their price range and maybe the audience see something of themselves in the artists. Also on my contents page the fact that you can subscribe and save money this will relate to my audience as many of them may be students struggling with money.

I believe that the range of technologies we’ve used such as Adobe Photoshop have helped me produce a more professional magazine. As Adobe Photoshop has many features that helped me achieve and create the exact pages that I had in my mind. Out of all programmes similar to Adobe Photoshop, I believe this one is the best and helped me complete my work to the best I could. While I was researching my magazine and created the basic ideas of what I wanted it to look like, I created simple drafts on Microsoft Publisher as it was easy to use, and was the best programme for me to achieve what I wanted as shown (my draft cover, 9th December at 9.57. Also Draft contents page, 13th December at 13.37) I also believe using websites such as blogger was a great idea, as we could look back and review our work and if we were then not happy with it, it could be easily changed and put right, something that we would of not been able to do if everything had to be written. It also helps keep everything in the same place and all together while we were making so many changes, some of them minor but helps us improve our grade, or work could of easily of gone missing. Also another advantage of using a website like blogger you are able to have easy access to audience feedback, as people who view your work are able to comment about your work, maybe on areas of improvement. You are also able to add polls asking your audience specific questions so that you are able to create and structure your work directly for the audiences needs. I added these polls to my blog’s homepage, so that when my target audience who are viewing my blog are able to vote and comment straight away no problem (http://kyraarthur.blogspot.com/).  Another advantage is that you are able to add direct links to your blog, so the audience are able to see where you got the inspiration for a certain ideas or why have done, placed things in a particular way. I find now after doing these projects that these programmes are a lot easier to use, and I can now use them with ease then the first time when I struggled to do anything.

Now that I look back to the preliminary task I now know how much I have progressed and learnt since then. I now have a greater understanding of Photoshop as I managed to do tasks such as scaling my pictures, so they fit nicely on my double page spread and cover, also cropping pictures to make them more effective and attention grabbing such as in my double page spread, I have also had to use methods such as using the magic hand tool, and the eye dropper tool, so I was able to erase of unwanted items off my pictures, like the main picture on my contents page, where on the picture in the background there was a bed and wires making my picture look unprofessional, So I had to use the eraser tool to rub the items out, then I used the eyedropper tool to get the exact colour of the background and then used the paint brush to repaint the picture from where I had removed the wires, I had to keep reusing the eyedropper tool, so that in the picture I could keep the shadows and the effects that were on the wall. I also had to crop most of my pictures so they looked effective and were able to fit on my practical products. I now find I can achieve more with the program and make things I am designing look more realistic and professional. I have learnt how to create different aspects of magazines such as the contents page, double page spread and the cover. I have learnt the key conventions and where I must place things such as mastheads, strap lines and puffs for maximum affect on my audience, I now know how to attract particular audiences and what I have to do to create a successful magazine. I have also learnt about institutions, how they work and how they publish and distribute their magazines, one of the main things I learnt is how to actually represent an institution, and I believe I have shown this in the music magazine I have created.

After conducting research for audience feedback on my magazine cover, contents and double page spread I have found many varied opinions on my magazine. I had sent out a questionnaire asking a range of questions I also used many techniques to collect my data. I asked my audience to rate my practical products on a likert scale from 1 - 10 they where also asked comment on any improvements they thought I could make through an open ended question. When I asked my audience about the genre of my magazine they where able to choose from a range of answers, they were also allowed to pick more then one. It was shown that people had varied opinions on what genre my magazine was as 75% believed my genre was purely indie. 5% of people were undecided between pop and indie and the last 20% believed it to be rock or rock/indie cross. Hollie Allison believed that I connoted the genre of my magazine by on the cover having the artists ‘jumping in mid-air’ and she thought I carried this theme on to my contents page by then picturing the artists ‘flipping their hair’. My magazine on a whole got and average rating of 9 as did my cover. My double page spread got an average rating of 10 and my contents a average of 8. When I asked how they thought my magazine looked professional Kim Walker said ‘Good photography and well laid out’ Hollie also said about the layout and also about the text and colours I had used. It was also commented that on my double page spread the highlighted quotes worked well. On my contents page it was said that features looked interesting however it was also said that I needed more information on the pictures featured on my contents page. On my front cover ‘Wendy Arthur’ said that it is ‘visually looks fun and appealing’ and that for improvement I could add more information about what is in my magazine. After my audience feedback I found out that there is some areas of  my magazine that could be improved. To improve my magazine I should develop my contents page as that got the lowest average rating in my audience feedback questionnaire. According to my audience they believe my contents page should contain more information on what my magazine includes and give more in depth information for the smaller pictures that are features of other articles within my magazine.   

Final Pieces




Friday, 8 April 2011

Improved Evaluation

After feedback I have decided to redraft my evaluation so I am able to try and improve it.

The brief we were given was called our foundation portfolio it asked us to create an original music magazine, we had to include a front cover, a contents page and a double page spread, within these products we must have had at least four original images. The products we were to produce all had to follow a particular genre of our choice. In the end I choose my magazine to be Indie/Alternative. When I found out the brief I believe the best way to produce a professional magazine is by doing in depth research. I chose three different magazines that were similar to what I wanted my magazine to look like I used the L.I.I.A.R analysis and analysed them all individually. I analysed them on characteristics such as photography placement of text, mast head and puffs, the conventions used in magazines of that genre. This is shown in posts (my L.I.I.A.R analysis of three magazines, 23rd November 2010) When I discovered the band I was going to feature throughout my practical products, I conducted research on how smaller band are photographed and represented as show in post (Photographic Research, 15th December 2010, 11.01) The conventions of this genre are vintage clothing, piercings and tattoo’s more conventions are explained in one of my previous posts ‘music genre on 23rd November, 2010 at 9:02’ I believe my magazine is very conventional as my masthead is placed in the top right hand side it is a bold colour with a contrasting colour outline. The headline is placed in the centre and is the same colour as the masthead, you can also find strap lines which you find on a real magazine cover. Also there is a barcode and issue date, price and issue number in the lower right hand corner. My contents page also follows conventions by having a large title at the top of the page in the centre, having lots of headlines with the features underneath they all have page numbers which is seen on professional magazine contents page. My double page spread follows conventions by having a large picture of the main artists and having a large centred headline, the text of the article is also sorted into columns which is seen in all magazine articles. Also I have used drop caps for the start of the articles intro and main body. Then to attract my audience to read my article I have used up out quotes, which is seen in many magazines so it makes the reader want to read on and finish the article.  

My magazine represents my targeted social group (young adults – 16-25) by on the front cover offering the reader to ‘win free gig tickets for a whole year’, and also ‘the top 10 must have gifts’. The genre Indie/Alternative has a mainly male audience, However my front cover features a female band, This may attract females as the girls want to be like the band, or this may make males want to buy my magazine as they may be attracted to the band. My contents page features artists who that age range are interested in such as ‘Vampire Weekend’ and also ‘Tinie Tempah’. On my double page spread ‘the only exceptions’ are around my target age range and also are interested in the same things my audience are interested in, and the interview that is featured on my page asks questions that I’m sure my audience would ask and want to find out.

I believe an institution such as Bauer media as rival magazines such as NME are published by IPC media. I believe my magazine is very similar to NME apart from NME promotes new music I want my magazine to be produced in a similar way and follow a similar format. However I want my magazine to feature more mainstream artists. I think also my magazine and NME have the same target age range and the same readership profiles for example I believe my audience would see music as a main part of their live and I also expect the audience for NME and my magazine AMP to have same interests and hobbies such as playing sport going to the cinema and socializing with friends. They also have the same price range as NME and are published at the same intervals e.g. Monthly. Also at this moment in time Bauer Media doesn’t not publish any magazine like mine or a magazine that in anyway could rival NME. This is why I believe that Bauer Media should distribute my magazine. As they will know

I believe that the target audience for my magazine is the age range of about 16 – 25, as the genre of the music in my magazine has had a greater effect on this generation than any other. The fact that the artists are within this age range and also the fact that on my double page spread the artists say that they would like to offer a student discount this directly relates to my audience and helps them identify with the artists. Also on my contents page it has features such as ‘this months top 10 albums’ and ‘your letters’  these features are what my target age range most enjoy reading these things. Also on my contents page it says about ‘in the spotlight’ a feature that introduces the readers to new and upcoming bands I feel that this is relevant to my target audience as people of that age are all about finding new music and talents and as technology has advanced things such as YouTube has made the generation able to access these artists and this has helped encourage their find for new music. So I believe this was a relevant thing to add to my magazine and helps attract the audience. This is another reason why on my contents page I have featured a website for my magazine as my target generation are driven by the Internet and technology.

My magazine attracts it’s audience in many different ways. The first is by the style of the masthead, the font is very distinctive and not conventional and helps me connote the alternative genre. The way the artists are photographed make them look like they are having fun, full of live and that they are crazy, This is similar to how I expect my readers to act and behave. It helps the audience to relate to the artists. Just like on my double page spread I made the artists appear as normal and down to earth as possible, so the audience can relate to them and maybe hope that they will be in their position one day. The clothes that the artists are wearing are normal clothes found in high street shops they also match the genre of my magazine as the artist are wearing checked shirts and skinny jeans ‘music genre on 23rd November, 2010 at 9:02’ and the clothes of the artists may be similar to the audiences clothes nothing designer or out of their price range and maybe the audience see something of themselves in the artists. Also on my contents page the fact that you can subscribe and save money this will relate to my audience as many of them may be students struggling with money.

I believe that the range of technologies we’ve used such as Adobe Photoshop have helped me make a more professional magazine. As Adobe Photoshop has many features that helped me achieve and create the exact pages that I had in my mind. Out of all programmes similar to Adobe Photoshop, I believe this one is the best and helped me complete my work to the best I could. While I was researching my magazine and created the basic ideas of what I wanted it to look like, I created simple drafts on Microsoft Publisher as it was easy to use, and was the best programme for me to achieve what I wanted as shown (my draft cover, 9th December at 9.57. Also Draft contents page, 13th December at 13.37) I also believe using websites such as blogger was a great idea, as we could look back and review our work and if we were then not happy with it, it could be easily changed and put right, something that we would of not been able to do if everything had to be written. It also helps keep everything in the same place and all together while we were making so many changes, some of them minor but helps us improve our grade, or work could of easily of gone missing. Also another advantage of using a website like blogger you are able to have easy access to audience feedback, as people who view your work are able to comment about your work, maybe on areas of improvement. You are also able to add polls asking your audience specific questions so that you are able to create and structure your work directly for the audiences needs. Another advantage is that you are able to add direct links to your blog, so the audience are able to see where you got the inspiration for a certain ideas or why have done, placed things in a particular way. I find now after doing these projects that these programmes are a lot easier to use, and I can now use them with ease then the first time when I struggled to do anything.

Now that I look back to the preliminary task I now know how much I have progressed and learnt since then. I now have a greater understanding of Photoshop as I managed to do tasks such as scaling my pictures, so they fit nicely on my double page spread and cover, also cropping pictures to make them more effective and attention grabbing such as in my double page spread, I have also had to use methods such as using the magic hand tool, and the eye dropper tool, so I was able to get rid of unwanted items off my pictures, like the main picture on my contents page. I now find I can achieve more with the program and make things I am designing look more realistic and professional. I have learnt how to create different aspects of magazines such as the contents page, double page spread and the cover. I have learnt the key conventions and where I must place things such as mastheads, strap lines and puffs for maximum affect on my audience, I now know how to attract particular audiences and what I have to do to create a successful magazine. I have also learnt about institutions, how they work and how they publish and distribute their magazines, one of the main things I learnt is how to actually represent an institution, and I believe I have shown this in the music magazine I have created.

After conducting research for audience feedback on my magazine cover, contents and double page spread I have found many varied opinions on my magazine. I had sent out a questionnaire asking a range of questions I also used many techniques to collect my data. I asked my audience to rate my practical products on a likert scale from 1 - 10 they where also asked comment on any improvements they thought I could make through an open ended question. When I asked my audience about the genre of my magazine they where able to choose from a range of answers, they were also allowed to pick more then one. It was shown that people had varied opinions on what genre my magazine was as 75% believed my genre was purely indie. 5% of people were undecided between pop and indie and the last 20% believed it to be rock or rock/indie cross. Hollie Allison believed that I connoted the genre of my magazine by on the cover having the artists ‘jumping in mid-air’ and she thought I carried this theme on to my contents page by then picturing the artists ‘flipping their hair’. My magazine on a whole got and average rating of 9 as did my cover. My double page spread got an average rating of 10 and my contents a average of 8. When I asked how they thought my magazine looked professional Kim Walker said ‘Good photography and well laid out’ Hollie also said about the layout and also about the text and colours I had used. It was also commented that on my double page spread the highlighted quotes worked well. On my contents page it was said that features looked interesting however it was also said that I needed more information on the pictures featured on my contents page. On my front cover ‘Wendy Arthur’ said that it is ‘visually looks fun and appealing’ and that for improvement I could add more information about what is in my magazine.                               

My Media Questionaire

This is the questionnaire I sent out to 10 people for my audience feed back. Throughout my questionaire there was a range of questions so my audience where able to give thier full opionion on my magazine.

1, What genre do you believe my magazine to be? (circle)

Rock     Pop    Indie    Jazz    Blues    Heavy Metal

2, What gives you this impression?


3, How would you rate my magazine on a whole?

1   2   3   4   5   6   7   8   9   10

4, What makes my magazine look professional?

5, Rate my front cover

1   2   3   4   5   6   7   8   9   10

6, What could I improve?

7, What works well?

8, Rate my contents page

1   2   3   4   5   6   7   8   9   10

9, What could I improve?

10, What works well?

11, Rate my double page spread

1   2   3   4   5   6   7   8   9   10

12, What could I improve?

13, What works well?

Tuesday, 22 March 2011

Data Analysis

After collecting the data about my music magazine from my polls and questionaires and I have created these graphs, these will help show my audiences opinions and explian why I have choosen to do particular things within my practicle products.  



Since 63% of my audience picked 'paramore' as thier favourite band, I have featured one of thier band members, on my contents page, I have then also mentioned the band in my double page spread and have also features a band that are similar to 'paramore'


As my audience said that thier favourite part of a music magazine was 'single/album reviews' I made sure that featured this on my contents page as a feature within my magazine. As no body voted for the 'editors letter' as thier favourite part, I haver not made it a large featuer on my contents page, but after feedback I was told that my contents page would look more complete with one. 


My magazine is A monthly magazine, I know that 18% of my audience are most likely to by it. I know that 45% of my audience by magazines monthly or more regular.

I believe that after audience feedback, my magazine premote it's genre well, as most people voted to say that my magazine represtents the indie genre. They did also0 think it could be pop or rock, but as these genres are not that different from my target genre, I feel like I have nothing to worry about.


Friday, 18 March 2011

My Final Pieces

These are my final versions of my Front Cover, Contents Page and Double Page Spread.



The Genre Of My Music Magazine.

After sending out my questionnaire and collecting my audience feedback, I have discovered that there was many mixed opinions about the genre of my magazine. The audience were able to chose from ...

  • Blues 
  • Pop
  • Indie
  • Rock 
  • Jazz and
  • Heavy Metal.
After feedback I discovered that people were undecided between Indie, Pop and Rock. As none of these genres are dramyically different from my aimed genre. I believe I have covered all the conventions of my choosen genre.

Here is the graph to show the results I had collected about the genre of my magazine.

Evaluation.

Media Evaluation – Music Magazine.

The brief asked us to create a music magazine, we had to include a front cover, a contents page and a double page spread all of a particular genre of our choice. I believe my magazine is very conventional, my masthead is placed in the top right hand side it is a bold colour with a contrasting colour outline. The headline is placed in the centre and is the same colour as the masthead, you can also find strap lines which you find on a real magazine cover. Also there is a barcode and issue date, price and issue number in the lower right hand corner. My contents page also follows conventions by having a large title at the top of the page in the centre, having lots of headlines with the features underneath they all have page numbers which is seen on professional magazine contents page. My double page spread follows conventions by having a large picture of the main artists and having a large centred headline.

My magazine represents my targeted social group (young adults – 16-25) by on the front cover offering the reader to ‘win free gig tickets for a whole year’, and also ‘the top 10 must have gifts’. Also on my contents page features artists who that age range are interested in such as ‘Vampire Weekend’ and also ‘Tinie Tempah’. On my double page spread ‘the only exceptions’ are around my target age range and also are interested in the same things my audience are interested in, and the interview that is featured on my page asks questions that I’m sure my audience would ask and want to find out.

I believe an institution such as IPC media as they publish magazines such NME,I believe my magazine is very similar to NME apart from NME promotes new music I want my magazine to be produced in the same way and follow the format I just want it to feature more mainstream artists. I think also my magazine and NME have the same target age range and the same readership profiles, they also have the same price range as NME and are published at the same intervals e.g. Monthly. This is why I believe that IPC should distribute my magazine, as they will now how advertise and market it.

I believe that the target audience for my magazine is the age range of about 16 – 25, as the genre of the music in my magazine has had a greater affect on this generation than any other. The fact that the artists are within this age range and also the fact that on my double page spread the artists say that they would like to offer a student discount this directly relates to my audience and helps them identify with the artists. Also on my contents page it has features such as ‘this months top 10 albums’ and ‘your letters’  these features are what my target age range most enjoy reading these things. Also on my contents page it says about ‘in the spotlight’ a feature that introduces the readers to new and upcoming bands I feel that this is relevant to my target audience as people of that age are all about finding new music and talents and as technology has advanced things such as YouTube has made the generation able to access these artists and this has helped encourage their find for new music, So I believe this was a relevant thing to add to my magazine and helps attract the audience.

My magazine attracts it’s audience in many different ways. The first is by the style of the masthead, the font is very distinctive and not conventional and helps me connote the alternative genre. The way the artists are photographed make them look like they are having fun, full of live and that they are crazy, This is similar to how I expect my readers to act and behave. It helps the audience to relate to the artists. Just like on my double page spread I made the artists appear as normal and down to earth as possible, so the audience can relate to them and maybe hope that they will be in their position one day. The clothes that the artists are wearing are normal clothes found in high street shops and maybe be similar to the audiences clothes nothing designer or out of their price range and maybe the audience see something of themselves  in the artists. Also on my contents page the fact that you can subscribe and save money this will relate to my audience as many of them may be students struggling with money.

I believe that the range of technologies we’ve used such as Photoshop have helped me make a more professional looking magazine. As Photoshop has many features that helped me achieve and create the exact pages that I had in my mind. Out of all programmes similar to Photoshop, I believe this one is the best and helped me complete my work to the best I could. I also believe using websites such as blogger was a great idea, as we could look back and review our work and if we were then not happy with it, it could be easily changed and put right, something that we would of not been able to do if everything had to be written. It also helps keep everything in the same place and all together while we were making so many changes, some of them so minor but helps us improve our grade, or work could of easily of gone missing. I find now after doing these projects that these programmes are a lot easier to use, and I can now use them with ease then the first time when I struggled to do anything.

Now that I look back to the preliminary task I now know how much I have progressed and learnt since then. I now have a greater understanding of Photoshop and now find I can achieve more with the program and make things I am designing look more realistic and professional. I have learnt how to create different aspects of magazines such as the contents page, double page spread and the cover. I have learnt the key conventions and where I must place things such as mastheads, strap lines and puffs for maximum affect on my audience, I now know how to attract particular audiences and what I have to do to create a successful magazine. I have also learnt about institutions, how they work and how they publish and distribute their magazines, one of the main things I learnt is how to actually represent an institution, and I believe I have shown this in the music magazine I have created.

After conducting research for audience feedback on my magazine cover, contents and double page spread I have found many varied opinions on my magazine. I had sent out a questionnaire asking a range of questions out of rating my practical products out of 10 and comment on any improvements they thought I could make. It was shown that people had varied opinions on what genre my magazine was as 75% believed my genre was purely indie. 5% of people were undecided between pop and indie and the last 20% believed it to be rock or rock/indie cross. Hollie Allison believed that I connoted the genre of my magazine by on the cover having the artists ‘jumping in mid-air’ and she thought I carried this theme on to my contents page by then picturing the artists ‘flipping their hair’. My magazine on a whole got and average rating of 9 as did my cover. My double page spread got an average rating of 10 and my contents a average of 8. When I asked how they thought my magazine looked professional Kim Walker said ‘Good photography and well laid out’ Hollie also said about the layout and also about the text and colours I had used. It was also commented that on my double page spread the highlighted quotes worked well. On my contents page it was said that features looked interesting however it was also said that I needed more information on the pictures featured on my contents page. On my front cover ‘Wendy Arthur’ said that it is ‘visually looks fun and appealing’ and that for improvement I could add more information about what is in my magazine.

Wednesday, 9 March 2011

Final Cover

This is my final front cover for my music magazine.


Since my last post I have added an extra part to the masthead that will now feature on all of my future magazines, I have added what the word AMP stands for, I think this makes it look more professional and it's more eye catching to the audience. 


Friday, 18 February 2011

My Final Pieces

These are all of my final pieces of work for my media magazine ...

  • My Front Cover
  • My Contents Page
  • My Double Page Spread
  • My 2nd Double Page Spread


    This is my front cover. 'AMP. Issue 313. January 2011'
    This is my contents page, I have now center aligned the date and website so it fits in with the rest of the contents page. I have also made page six into the number instead of the word so it fits in with the rest of the contents page, and follows a theme.
    This is my double page spread. 'That I am submitting for marking'
    This is my 2nd double page spread. 'this is for my benefit to show the whole extent of my article and to show my magazines consistency'

Other Examples Of My Double Page Spread

These are the other variations I have tired whilst trying to complete my double page spread ...

I though this worked well, however I felt it took some aspects of the picture away. Also I like having the words 'the only exceptions' in the top right hand corner as I wanted this to be a running trend through out my magazine.


On this picture I liked that it said 'the only exceptions' at the top in the centre, But I was missing the fact that the headline had gone over the picture. I also couldn't find a suitable colour to make sure it was clearly visible over all of the picture.

I felt on this one most of the text was close and squished together, I didn't like the fact that not much of the article to fit in and I couldn't get the next question in as it was too large.

Tuesday, 15 February 2011

My Improved 2nd Double Page Spread

To improve my 2nd double page spread, I have added page numbers in the bottom corners as this is what you would find in an actual music magazine and these numbers are also consistent with the numbers written on the contents page. As my main double page spread would be pages six and seven, therefore as this is the follow on of the article these pages are eight and nine ...

Monday, 14 February 2011

My 2nd Double Page Spread

As my whole article did not fit on to my actual double page spread I have produced a simple 2nd one, to show my full article and to show the trends that would carry on throughout my magazine and it's articles ...

Improved Contents Page

This is my improved contents page. I have added page numbers to the remaining pictures and also added page numbers for the rest of the articles featured on the contents page ...

I think this now looks more professional scince I have added the page numbers.

Friday, 11 February 2011

Final Double Page Spread

Since my last shot I have been changing the position of the headline for the story, and changing the size of the text until I think it looked like a professional magazine. This is my final double page spread ...


I think this works well, as in my opinion it looks like a professional article, also it has the small captions that catch the readers eye, this makes them want to read the article as the caption interests them.


Tuesday, 8 February 2011

Introduction to my article

This is the introduction that is placed on my double page spread before the Q&A session with the band. It is written like the person who has interviewed the band has written it and is given the audience an overview of how the day of the interview was ...

We got the girls into our studio to ask them the questions you all wanna know. So on the 21st of January I asked the girls to come down to our London studio. I organised the interview for 12 o’clock, however they wanted it for 3 o’clock. (Rough Night) Thank God these girls are still down to earth as this is the first interview in years were we’ve sat and munched on biscuits and chocolate while chatting. I usually have to stick to a diet of salad and flavoured tea while speaking to some of the other stars as they need to keep their stick thin figures. I enjoyed this interview as the girls were great, and we had a good laugh, as they still seem real and normal ... Just like us I guess. Enjoy! Kyra x

Double Page Spread - Step Three

This is the third shot of my double page spread. I have added a brief introduction to the article. It appears to be in the words of the interviewer (me), so when the audience read it they feel more connected to the magazine and the article. I have seen examples of this in magazines such as NME ...

I added an introduction to my article, this is so when my audience read the article they feel like they have a connection with the band but also the person who is writing it.

Double Page Spread - Step Two

This is the second shot of my double page spread, I have added the bands name in the right hand corner, if I was to produce more articles for my magazine this trend would follow throughout. I have also added the headline for the double page spread ...

I think this works well, as I have seen this style of magazine article before in other magazines throughout my research.

Double Page Spread - Step One

This is my double page spread. So far I have chosen the picture I am going to use this is once again an energetic picture to keep with the theme of the cover and contents page. I have placed it where I want it and I have also added a caption to the picture. That is actually a passage from the double page spread that's why it has been placed in quotation marks, the caption ...

I think this picture portrays the energy I am trying to keep throughout my magazine. Also one of the band members is keeping eye contact with the audience, and it keeps the idea of a party theme.

Thursday, 3 February 2011

Improved Front Cover

This is the improved front cover, of my music magazine. After feedback I have decided to rid of the items in the background of the picture so it isolates the artists and makes them the main attraction for the reader and I have changed the masthead so it stands out more. I think these changes have made my magazine look better and look more professional ...


Wednesday, 2 February 2011

Final Contents Page

This is my finished contents page, I have added a banner at the bottom of my page, saying to subscribe as I found that this featured in many of the magazines I researched, and as it says that the reader saves money this will make the reader subscribe if they are a frequent reader and making more people pick AMP then other magazines ...



This is my final contents page, however I have noticed that I have forgotten to add page numbers, and also forgot to add page numbers to the pictures in the bottom corner.


Tuesday, 1 February 2011

Contents page - Step Four

This is the fourth shot of my contents page, I have added more pictures as when I was researching contents pages they always seemed to feature many different pictures of the artists who were going to be featured in the magazine ...


I have added two other pictures in the lower contents with their own captions, it works well as the readers can look at the picture and recognise the artist and then quickly read the caption and see what the article is about, and then decide if they want to see it.

Contents Page - Step Three

This is the third shot of my contents page, I have added the reviews that my magazine will conduct and also the features that appear in my magazine every month ...



I have stuck with the theme of having the title of the contents section in red and the same font as the masthead, I have also made the words 'in the spotlight' bigger so they stretch across the space and looks like a title and similar to the title above, and so they make more of an impact to the reader.


The reasons why ...

The reasons why I chose to add 'single/albums reviews' to my magazine is because this is what got the most votes in my poll. I also added an 'your letters' section as after my research with my polls I found out my audience enjoy reading this section ...

Single/Album Reviews
  5 (41%)
 
Editors Letter
  0 (0%)
Gig Guide
  1 (8%)
 
Alternative Download Chart
  1 (8%)
 
Your Letters
  2 (16%)
 
 

Contents Page - Step Two

This is the second shot of my contents page, I have now started to add the features of this weeks magazine and also other story lines that will be in my magazine ...



I think this works well as the words 'features' and 'in the spotlight' are in the same font as the masthead, they are also in the same colour, showing consistency. I think it works well as the font is quite odd and distinctive, which is a trait of indie style. As they font is distinctive the magazine will be easily recognised in shops next to all the other magazines. I have also added a caption to 'the only exceptions' photograph so the readers are able to read a quick snippet of information and are able to decide if they actually want to read the article or not.


Friday, 28 January 2011

Contents Page - Step One

After picking what my title of my contents page will look like. I picked what photo I will use for my main article about 'the only exceptions' the main feature of my magazine this week.

I think the pale colour of the picture background works well against the dark background of the title. The picture of 'the only exceptions' still shows energy just like the cover did, keeping the band and feature consistent. I also put 'page six' in the corner of the picture as I have seen this in other magazines so if the audience only want to read about that band, they can see straight away what page within the magazine they are on.

My Contents Page - Title

These are the different styles I have tried out for my title that will be placed at the top of the page.

I like this as the words 'this week in' are very bold and clear, however I believe that when made this thick it looks like it has been written in a different font, and spoils the consistency that runs throughout my magazine.


I like this as the words are simple and clear, however the word 'amp' does not have as much as an impact as it did in the one above. 



After reviewing the last two titles and looked at their weaknesses I have come up with this, outlining the word 'amp' so it then has a greater effect to the audience and looks similar to the magazine masthead.


And also this one, as i thought the rest of my contents page will be on a white background i thought I should try and make the title area stand out, so I have given it a black background, unlike the rest of the page which will be white with black writing. I tried the word 'amp' with a white outline but it didn't look right. So I just kept it red.


Friday, 21 January 2011

Second Version Of Draft Contents Page

This is the second attempt of my contents page. This page show were things will be placed, what articles and how the page numbers and features will go. Now that I have chosen my features for my magazine contents page I think that they will work well when placed like this and within my research I found many contents page set out it similar ways.

Features For Contents Page

These are the articles that are going to be featured on my contents page to look like the full content of my music magazine ...

Features

Vampire Weekend

Vampire Weekend to take on the challenge of glasto weekend!!!

Funeral Party

This weeks single of the week on iTunes. 'we got the most downloads compared to other singles from previous weeks'

Biffy Clyro

'Matt Cardle ruined our lives!'

Avril Lavigne

We get up close & personal with this stunning star, with her new album due to release.

Every Month

Your letters

10 new tracks for the month

Single and Album chart (according to our readers)

In the spotlight

This months new upcoming bands, who you'll love and want to see.

Reviews

This months top 10 albums

The most anticipated albums of the year.

Plus ...

This months top buys

This years top 10 must have gifts.